Sunday, March 13, 2011

First Dialog Ever

     "Wow, look at this," exclaimed Robert, "there are so many good deals!"
     "All you care about is your stupid newspaper." mumbled Nancy, she was tired of Robert and his great deal hunting, they already had enough tiolet paper to last a lifetime.
     "What was that you said?" asked Robert, still buried in his daily newspaper,
     "Oh nothing." replied Nancy, "Would you like some more tea?"
     "No, not right now maybe later"Nancy got up and went into the kitchen to get herself some more tea, as well as to give herself a few minutes away from Robert.
     Robert yelled , "Hey, they have bath towels on sale! Buy two get one free!"
     "Don't we already have enough towels?!"
     He yelled agian "But they are on sale!"
     "Ok, fine then, let's get dressed and go get your cheap towls." Nancy angerly stated. Twenty minutes later they where heading out the door. Robert full of excitment and Nancy full of anger.

2 comments:

  1. Al 4 assignments complete. Dialogue needs some proofreading. Gr 12 paragraph could use more detail.

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